Do You Use Power Words on Your Web Site?
by Ryan - October 13th, 2006
I thought today might be a good time to discuss one of the marketing aspects of a client site that, in most circumstances, the client has total control over. And that is the words being used on their web site…
Here’s something most people do not consider: Marketing people are Manipulative. Suprised? Probably not. That’s why you hire them. What the general public does not consider is the fact that marketing people just starting to move over to the web. They’ve been holding out for years now, but the inevitable exodus to online marketing has begun. With that in mind, we all need to understand that a lot of the web sites doing business online were NOT developed or handled by marketing people, and a lot of them still are not. Many of these web sites we see were set up and written by the everyday person, who was opportunistic enough to hop on the wave. Good for them. However, because of this, general marketing concepts were never even put into play by many of these sites, yet they still make sales. It’s another case of success in spite of… which should give people even more proof that the online market is for real. People want it.
As a result, the exodus I mentioned above is currently happening. Why? Because business people and marketers alike understand that if they implement some of these basic concepts onto the web and use their markeing minds to improve sales in this regard, things can basically go nowhere but up. Up sounds good to me, what do you think?
Which leads us to the use of Power, or, Muscle words. Are you using them on your site?
I found a truely excellent article written by Robin Nobles at search engine guide. The article is entitled: “The Use of Muscle Words on Your Web Site. . .148 Power Words Designed To Draw Your Customers In“
Ms. Nobles is absolutely right on with her advice and I suggest that anyone who updates their own web site copy read it and learn these power / muscle words AND how to use them on your web site. Not only does the use of these words increase the clicks to your site from within the SERP’s, but they also drive sales when the user lands there, and begins the shopping process.
To see this advice in action, we are given examples. Here is a mistake I know many of us make:
Another idea:
Go through your Web site copy. Look for the word “very.†Delete it. If you need to come up with a stronger adjective or verb, do so.Example:
This very old book is in perfect condition and has been kept in a clear plastic bag to protect it.
Change to:
This antique book . . .
This heirloom book . . .
This museum-quality book . . .“Perfect†is pretty lame too. Change it to:
flawless
Change “clear†to “sheer.â€
Blunt and to the point, yes… but still true. The power of the written word has been constant throughout its time. Emotions are sparked, calls to action are followed and people can be gently guided towards an end goal they may never have followed before, simply because of a word. Conversly, the wrong emotion can be sparked with the wrong word and the outcome may be a quick exit from the site.
So I suggest we all take a look at our web site copy and see if we can do any better with our written words. I know I can do better, what about you?


